Comic Market 104 happened earlier this week in Japan, and on its second day, lots of doujinshi of all kinds were sold.
As I don't live in Japan, I couldn't go join the sweaty masses under the almost 40º Celsius temperatures of the Tokyo Summer to participate, but since nowadays lots of artists release their works online simultaneously, the days of waiting for months for scans are mostly gone - there's always the hidden gems and the doujinka that release physical only but, for my admittedly limited range of interests, that is not the case.
There are 4 Doujins I read this week that were sold at C104 and I want to share some thoughts about them. This is half review half recommendation post.
As a side note, I can't help but feel that as time goes by, more doujin are flying under my radar because I don't know the names of up-and-coming artists, so if you found something cool released this Comiket feel free to share in the comments.
There will be moderate spoilers for each doujin, especially for the Victim Girls one which I described in more detail. The rest I just went over briefly while discussing the content, that one I felt I couldn't discuss what I liked without telling the story.
Omae no Kaa-chan Ikutoki no Kao Sugee Busu da zo w 3
Third and final installment of Neromashin's series which started as a fairly standard Mom NTR but evolved and changed as the shota protagonist joined his bullies to dominate his mom himself. In the first installment, main character Yuuto entered an agreement with the bullies who were training his mom: he brings another big-breasted woman, they let him fuck his mom. He brought his surprisingly youthful grandma (on his father's side) Fumiko and got high on the feeling of dominating and degrading his mother Yukie. By the end of chapter 2, both Yukie and Fumiko are fully enslaved by the boys, and Yukie even starts sending pictures to her husband (who's away on a business trip) on "Yuuto-sama"'s orders.
This chapter is exactly what you'd expect - debauched sex all the way through between the boys and the two women, who get degraded even further, happily humiliating themselves. Halfway through, the dad returns and is horrified by what his wife and mother have become, pregnant sex slaves with huge bushes of armpit hair constantly doing hideous expressions of sexual ecstasy, and moreover, by the role his son played in this. Yukie fully discards what love she had left for her husband and declares that she's a pig who loves Yuuto-sama, with Fumiko following suit, boasting that he was able to impregnate a 55-year-old like her. They expel enema in front of him and then give birth assisted by the boys shoving their hands in their asses. It's completely depraved and I love it.

A fair warning is that, this being Neromashin, there's a fair amount of scat. Like 6 or so pages in the 30-page doujin, not a huge deal, but it's a centerpiece in the climax. Another potentially divisive thing is, as the name of the series indicates (translated as "Your Mom's Face When She Cums is Fucking Ugly, lol"), a lot of focus is on the orgasm faces of the two women, who look extreme and "ugly" in the sense they're supposed to look indecent, vulgar, disgusting. There's tears, snot, teeth showing, and extreme ahegao. It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea but I really like it. The best thing about this series is that it proposes to be vile and it delivers on that both in the art and in the character development fronts.
Vanishing Reality ~Otome Ginsei Lumiphonia~
The first chapter of Satou Kuuki's newest series. Returning to the magical girl genre, this is a setup chapter that does a damn good job of building the setting and characters while still delivering on some hot sex. But it's still a setup chapter and it's a bit frustrating that we'll have to wait until next Comiket to get the second chapter and then until the next one for the third - because the way it's set up, there's no way it's going to be less than 3 chapters. But I'm getting ahead of myself. Let's dial it back to the beginning.

I won't dwell too much on the setting because I'm 100% going to make a review of the series once there are enough chapters, granted I'm still around by then. But basically, the magical girls stream their fights, and the impressions and feelings of everyone watching and commenting are channeled as power. The catch is that people don't know the magical girls are real - everyone thinks they're V-Tubers and that everything is just CG. Because they fight in a distorted space the monsters create (the titular Vanishing Reality). and any civilian caught in the mix loses their memory. It's a silly premise but there's enough groundwork laid on for it to work. Silver Star Maiden Lumiphonia is the magical girl we follow in this chapter, her secret identity being a high school girl named Oshimizu Seren. Seren gets involved with a boy named Kaoru after saving him from a monster (Kaoru doesn't lose his memories) and after a few pages of them getting to know each other over time, they have their first time together. It's after they do the deed that things start for real.
Zomel, the leader of the monsters, who appeared before violating women (to gather some sort of energy) hid a piece of one of a previously defeated monster in her shadow (I think, that was a bit confusing to me) and activates it during a fight after she "lost her purity". Zomel deduced being a virgin was a key component of her power, as "Maiden" is a part of her title. Now he assaults Lumiphonia with both his penis and tentacles, and her costume starts changing into a dark version. Turns out Zomel (who is more of a scientist-type villain despite his appearance, testing hypotheses and talking in more "scientific" style terms, rather than the usual Demon) decided to borrow the method the magical girls use to power up, and their sex is being streamed. The comments are mean, talking about her huge nipples, calling her a slut, most people thinking she's a Lumiphonia lookalike and not the real thing.


Their sexual is causing her suit to transform during sex and giving the opening for Zomel to corrupt her. He talks about how her cells are being "impregnated" (complete with a visual of an evil sperm entering a cell) with his essence. First her skin, then her organs, and eventually even her brain will be consumed. At one point, a womb tattoo shows up on her body, as Zomel proclaims she's now his, but then they are interrupted by another magical girl entering the Vanishing Reality, and he flees, leaving an untransformed and apparently back to normal Seren behind. She calls Zomel's name, which clues the new girl in on the fact that he defeated her.
And that's where it ends. Damn it, Satou Kuuki! I don't want to wait until December to read the next chapter! Which will be about the new girl, if he doesn't change his mind, so Seren's corruption will probably be somewhat on hold until next year. Argh. Though I do have a suspicion/copium that Seren is already mostly corrupted and that she will play a role in corrupting the new magical girl. Anyway.
I have mixed feelings. This manga needed the setup to work, the way the magical girl powers work is out there and the fact the villains capitalize on it so much means it needed to be well developed. And as a magical girl fan, it's fun on its own way to see a well-thought-out scenario as background. But on the other hand, it almost feels like a prologue. A tease. Which is why I didn't do a full review of it.
Victim Girls - Sennen Iki Tsuzuketa Megami Daikousha
After some experimenting with his two previous manga, Asanagi returns to the Victim Girls series, and returns in style. With an original work as well, which always turn out to be my favorites from him.
This one takes place in a fantasy world watched over by a goddess who concedes boons to people - power to heroes who defeated demon lords, healing powers to saints, and so on. The manga opens with a narration about that, and also explains that she has a priestess chosen as her human counterpart, who can live forever and has a power that can show her the past and future of anyone she locks eyes with, which she uses to pass judgment on people brought before her by the knights. The current priestess is named Flavia and she's 999 years old, though she looks as young as when she was blessed by the Goddess. In her long life, she grew bored of pretty much every hobby and distraction - except for masturbation. Flavia is incredibly sexually frustrated - she wants to lose her virginity before turning 1000, but everyone around her only sees her as a holy object of worship - they fear her, adore her, and worship her, but no one sees her as a woman. She's also confined to the temple, so she can't go out to solicit men elsewhere. She wears extremely skimpy clothing in an attempt to entice the men around her, to no avail. So masturbating is what's left to her, often using magic to peep on people in the city. Over the years Asanagi seems to have developed a thing for girls who are secretly obsessed with masturbating. I usually prefer girls who are righteous and sex-hating and get corrupted, but I also get the appeal and how it works into the usual Victim Girls theme of "female nature".
Flavia's favorite masturbation aide is watching a man who owns several sex slaves and makes them dress just like her. Things take a dark turn very fast when one of the girls is too loose for the guy and, when he decides to cast her away, she begs for the "final service" instead: being killed while having sex with him. Other two girls wrap a rope around her neck and choke her to death, and it's a blissful experience. The other girls see it as a huge honor, with the MC saying that one day it'll be their turn. After she croaks, he tells the girls to throw her body in the river.

Flavia masturbated to the whole thing, but on a rational level felt enraged and told herself that if she could leave the temple she would hunt down that guy. Well, as fate would have it, the next day he is brought before her to be judged for the death of the girl. He denies everything, saying it was the girls who killed her and threw the corpse away. It's technically the truth, so he'll escape the death penalty - until she looks into his future, and sees him strangling a woman to death with his own hands, though the woman seems to be loving every second of it. To her shock, the woman is her. She gives the man the death penalty. He's to be executed the next day. Unable to contain herself, however, Flavia goes to him at night by teleporting straight to his cell. Since he's the first to look at her with lustful eyes, and is having an erection even now, she is going to use him as a "human vibrator" to graduate from her virginity, taking advantage of the fact he's immobilized, shackled to the bed and thus "safe". It's Asanagi, you know how well this goes for her. She ends up cumming just by inserting his penis, and as she uses her powers to look into the future, sees herself as a slave catering to him. She needs to flee now to avoid that future, but her pussy is just clamping down harder. The guy of course frees himself from his shackles and forces her to move until she passes out, at which point he beats the crap out of her to make her tighten up.

By next morning, Flavia's body is full of slap marks and she hides in her room ashamed while feeling up her slap marks and getting horny again. She decides to look at the MC's "handsome face" one last time before his execution to schlick, only to see him violating the two nuns who went to his cell to hear his confession, choking them to death. The two girls break completely and start calling him a god. After they die, Flavia teleports to the cell and resurrects them with magic, confronting the MC but really, she's just putting on a facade, she's there to be taken. This is when she breaks completely and becomes his property. After she fully gives in there's even a few panes of internal monologue of her agonizing over how she wants to suck his cock but it's not proper for a female to act without a male's order. She and the two nuns service him together.
Just one problem: he's going to be executed. Her decision can't be overruled. She finds a solution: she can die in his stead. So the scene she saw when she first locked eyes with him plays out, while the two resurrected nuns watch over her. Flavia dies while seeing "the glorious future" he will usher in.

The death of the priestess summons the Goddess Iris herself. The Goddess is disgusted by the MC's action but he only thinks about fucking Iris as well since she's also a sow. But his hand burns when he tries to touch her. As an avatar of all women, he can only touch her if that is the collective will of all women in the world. At that moment, a resurrected Flavia grabs Iris and says that she's not honest since she was watching it all the time while she and the nuns were being fucked and killed. Dying to summon the goddess was part of Flavia's plan to save her master, and then she uses her powers to show Iris the future, and what we see is both Flavia and Iris serving the MC together as slaves, even getting pregnant. The future where he can touch and enslave Iris will arrive. The collective will of women will dictate he can touch and fuck her. Therefore, he can already touch her all he wants. When she comes out of the vision, she's already done. She says she won't lose to him, while already calling him master and squirting as he pulls her by the neck.
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Iris sees her fate |
The manga wraps up with a few pages showing the world transformed by the protagonist, with the order of nuns turned into sexual servants, several women (including Flavia and Iris) going through a routine of masturbating while hanging themselves and then being revived through magic, and so on, while the narration mentions that thousands of men were executed and, in a mirror of the opening text talking about the goddess granting blesses, talks about how she was subjugated by a new god and the happiness he brings to the women, and how despite their lives now being cut short, they're lived in full.
I really loved this one. It may be recency bias, but it feels like the best Asanagi doujin in a few years. Hot main girl, good secondary girls, and a very interesting use of the whole future vision thing. I mean, first, there's Flavia fulfilling her own prophecy due to her inescapable nature as a female, which is peak Asanagi, and then there's how cause and effect are basically broken by showing Iris the future: the fact in the future she becomes a slave in the future, meaning women will accept the protagonist as their owner, means she can be conquered now. Which then leads to the protagonist being able to conquer the world with her by his side. Galaxy brain move.
The focus on erotic asphyxiation is also to my liking. That's an element that's always there in Asanagi works but this time it's the centerpiece, and I think it's very well utilized. It never feels morbid despite all the deaths (though most of them are reversed through magic, there's still the bodies going limp), it feels like dark humor because it's so absurd. At least to me. I mean, the protagonist literally becomes God, this is not an edgy snuff manga trying to take itself seriously. I also love how Asanagi describes it as a pure love story in promotional material. Flavia does sacrifice herself out of love for her master, he is technically not wrong!
PERU Ochi
As someone who played Persona 3 back when it was relatively new, it's funny seeing it become such a big thing again thanks to the remake. And one of the best things to come out of the renascence of Persona 3 popularity is this corruption doujin by Sanatuki. Since this one was released online a week or so before Comiket, it's the only one already fan-translated at the time of writing this post.
As usual with Persona corruption and mind control doujins, we have a faceless unattractive protagonist who has a Persona that allows him to influence the girls. In this case, it's able to change the common sense of the girls and gradually brainwash them through pleasure, until they give themselves to the protagonist of their own free will (if you can call it that), at which point they're transmogrified into a coffin with a heart pattern, and inside their bodies and minds are transformed to suit the guy's tastes.
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Mitsuru in the process of being reborn |
At the start of the doujin, Fuuka has already been brainwashed and Mitsuru is undergoing remodeling inside her coffin (though we do get a short flashback showing her confronting the doujin's protagonist and getting fucked into submission), while Yukari has just been lured into his trap by Fuuka. She gets hit by a spell and passes out. The next day, her common sense is altered so she is easily convinced Mitsuru and Fuuka fucking the protagonist is normal, and keeps getting hornier and hornier as they keep putting her in voyeuristic situations, culminating in her getting a facial. During the Dark Hour, Yukari remembers what is happening.


This cycle goes on for a while, Yukari's common sense being toyed with during the day and she getting fucked during the dark hour. Soon enough, she's completely addicted to sex but still saying that she won't fall no matter how many times he cums inside her. Until one day the guy decides to ignore her. Since she isn't going to yield to him, he's just going to fuck Fuuka and Mitsuru instead. If Yukari wants it, she will have to beg for it.
This breaks Yukari and, goaded by the protagonist's Persona, she swears to become his slave and is remodeled inside the coffin.

Now what surprised me, and was the cherry on top corruption-wise, is that Yukari turns into a dark-skinned, gyaru-ish version of herself wearing a lewd version of her usual outfit. I love this kind of thing in corruption stuff. Soon after, Mitsuru and Fuuka become like that as well. This is explained as them becoming existences that mix their normal selves and shadows. Now they can act outside the dark hour, and the protagonist sends them to attack Gekkoukan High School. We have a few scenes of the girls (temporarily turned into futanari, which is expected from Sanatuki) corrupting the secondary girls of the game like Toriumi-sensei and Yuuko, who also get remodeled into dark-skinned slaves to the protagonist. The best in this part is Yukari getting furious at Toriumi for being rude to her master and "correcting" her attitude. This is the only futa content in the doujin.

After that, they take over the SEES dormitory (Mitsuru casting Pulinpa and Marin Karin, confusion and charm spells from the Persona series. Players of the original 2006 game will find hilarious that she actually lands a hit) and Fuuka and Mitsuru have a straight shota scene with a hypnotized Ken Amada, with (in a moment sadly lost in the translation) Fuuka saying that his graduation from virginity will be so good it will traumatize him. Yukari doesn't join the fun, she keeps fucking the protagonist saying she's devoted only to him.
There's also a few scenes with Aigis (remodeled into a sexbot) and Elizabeth (who's just doing it out of curiosity - and Igor doesn't give a shit someone just took over the whole operation), as well as the Female Protagonist from Persona 3 Portable, but they're pretty quick. It's the usual for big Sanatuki doujins: the first part is the main girls, the second part is corrupting every other character he can think of. I think the only P3 female character who didn't show was Maiko, the little girl, and that's probably because she hangs out in a completely different place than the other characters.
As I already stated I love the approach to the corruption Sanatuki took here, but as my summary probably makes clear, it's one you'll enjoy more if you're familiar with Persona 3. Besides featuring lots of characters, some of them very briefly, he works in concepts of the game into the doujin's plot, and so on. It's the same deal when he does doujins from other IPs, and that's one of the things I like about his works. Hell, if I'm being honest half the reason I watched Kimetsu no Yaiba was because I wanted to know who the girls were before reading his Kimetsu doujins. Was that overdoing it? Probably. Do I regret it? Nope, it was much better knowing exactly who everyone getting turned into a demon in that one was. But I digress. Going back to PERU Ochi, I feel in this case the art and the corruption are good enough that it can probably still be enjoyed by someone who never played Persona 3. It's just better if you did.

These are the four doujin I read and recommend from Summer Comiket. Given they're all from big-name doujinka, I expect the ones that aren't translated yet to get translations pretty soon.
Coming next to Dorei Cafe is probably the next Hentai Glossary, unless a JAV or game comes out of left field and I feel the need to talk about it before (like I just needed to talk about the Sentouin series in the previous post). But either way, that series is coming back soon.